muscles

In this sketch the definition in the muscles is realy good , the weight in the model can be seen in the shoulders slouching .Also in the hips this is good because this particular pose shows off the models muscles realy well.

if i could improve anything in the sketch it would be using more fine pencil lines in order to get the position of my model easier instead of using hard lines and having to erase the lines. however i would have used harder lines on the model after i had got the position to make it stand out more . I would have also added more tone to the muscles in order to realy make them stand out. There is some tone added to the muscle which i am proud of, and example of this is on the chest where you can clearly see the muscles contracting creating those lines. The stomach and legs also show a good level of muscle definition. Finaly i think that the proportion of this sketch is very good i achieved this by being very free with my pencil movements in the first stages of the sketch.